Hello, I'm a bit ahead of schedule so I'm posting a bit early. I've gotten some awesome feedback and a few ideas from readers that will be making their way into the story. Keep up the good work.
In this chapter John finds himself in some very serious shit. I hope you enjoy it. Keep up the feedback.
I'm also looking for an editor. I'm wanting a bonifide grammar nazi to help me keep those damn commas straight. I'm also looking to eliminate passive sentences from my writing. If you fit the bill and are interested let me know. Thanks.
TKR