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Chapter 10 is Here.

February 3, 2014
Posted at 2:01 am

Hello Everyone,
Chapter 10 is in. It contains the first sex scene of the story. I would really like to receive some feedback and constructive criticism on this chapter. What did I do right? What did I do wrong? Too coarse, too mechanical? I am aiming to create a story worth reading. What corrections would you make as a writer? Let me know.
Thanks again for reading.