Because I knew I would be traveling for work today, I actually set up this section of FP to post yesterday. Imagine my surprise when I arrived at my hotel, and it still hadn't gone up. I didn't realize that delayed stories are set up to post after 8:00 pm. Ah well, live and learn.
For previous FP readers, this is the section where I started adding a good bit of additional material. I think that one of the hardest things for authors to realize and specifically plan for is the fact that readers only know what you tell them about the storyline, the characters, and the conflicts they will eventually have to resolve. I know, it sounds ridiculously obvious, until you start looking back over what you've written, and realize that you've neglected to describe something that will end up being very important. So, I did a bit of that, and tried to add in a bit more background and character development as well.
The next release of Future's Path will include chapters eight through eleven, and should go up Sunday morning.
Please send me a note and let me know what you think so far. All feedback is appreciated.