I'm always anxious to release a chapter after it's written. That does get me in some trouble because, I tend to proofread and edit my stories a little to rapidly.
Chapter 67 of Claire fits that scenario. Tired, late last night when I finished it, I should have waited. But I didn't and the first version got posted here on SOL about 8:30 am, Eastern time.
Anyway, I apologize for my haste. I've spent the last couple of hours editing, fixing, proofreading and enhancing. The resulting product I hope is better but only the reader can tell.
So, if you happen to be the nearly 500 readers who've read it so far, it might be worth it to scan it again.
In any event, I'd appreciate your input and comments.