Chapter 13 looks good. Not saying it's perfect, I wouldn't risk that kind of karma, but it should be readable now.
Oh, and my apologies to those who saw "SLuT9 Part II", my previous blog entry, and thought a sequel was on its way.
While I am writing, I have about 30,000 words of a story written right now, It is NOT a sequel.
Thanks to everyone for the offers of assistance and thank you all for reading.
