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Ch 5 Corrections and repost

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I owe an apology to all those Indiana Hoosiers who I insulted by incorrectly spelling their nickname. Worse still was the fact that I must have read the word five or ten times without realizing my error. Happily, a sharp-eyed reader spotted it.
In addition, I had a continuity error. When Pete first got his chance to play in place of Demitrius, I had the coach tell him he was going to start. No! It was already the end of the first quarter, so that needed to be fixed as well.
I hope that's the end of these embarrassing errors.
Coaster2

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