I've updated Chapter 1 with some new formatting that will hopefully fix a few things as well as updating a few technical things.
Thanks for everyone that sent me feedback and especially those of you who let me know that firing a LAW inside a plane was a bad idea. Didn't totally think that one through evidently. I've fixed that one so thanks for the feedback.
Chapter 2 will be coming soon and the others a few days apart from each other after that for now. Hope to hear from more of you after Chapter 2! Thanks for reading everyone.
