I've made use of some of your comments about providing too much information in the preface to this 1st book in the Energists series. I've redone it, removing a good bit of information about the later books in this series. Hopefully, some suspense or mystery about what will happen in the future adds to your enjoyment.
I've also have 2 chapters done, not edited or rewritten, on the 2nd book - Encountering the Energists. I hope I'm able to tie up any dangling ends from the 1st book. I hope you've enjoyed reading it as much as I've enjoyed writing about my experiences with 'Kaleigh'.