I've finished writing (not been edited or redone yet though) the 1st book in this series. I've tried to incorporate some of your suggestions about making it more story and less sex. However, Kaleigh's upcoming birthday will be intense and I tried to paint a vivid picture of what she and I experienced.
I'm free writing the 2nd book right now (building off my outline), so hopefully when all the chapters from Book1 are here, I'll have something in the hopper from Book2, which will be MUCH shorter, with more science and science fiction.
Keep the comments/suggestions coming!