Please feel free to leave your comments / suggestions here. I do hope to hear the opinions of readers to see what they did or didn't like about a story. Your observations may help me explore areas I had not thought of in a story, or let me know if I am being too subtle or too obvious in my narrative. If you have character or story questions, I would be happy to give (spoiler free) answers here. It would be better to answer them here for everyone at once.
