I tried and tried. Just could not kill off the 'Tiny Terror' I know it was hard to understand those early chapters. 75 e-mails trying to explain what went wrong convinced me to not make things so convoluted.
I sent my great editors and proofreader the next chapter offering. I plan to tie-in the new Lapi story 'Baby...' and the things 'Daddy'(John) can do.
If they like it and don't take a 'contract' out on me, I'll post them both.