I have been going over the first few chapters of my story. I have found that going back I would like to take this story in a different direction. So that being said I am doing a major re-write of the story. The first chapter is back from the editors, but I think that this time I will wait until I have the current chapters as well as chapter six done before posting. I hope none of you are disappointed with the results of the re-write. I personally feel that I have done a much better job of it than I did before.