For all those who are following this, chapters 5 & 6 are now off to the moderator for approval.
I must say, this has been quite an adventure. For one thing, following all the statistics the site provides to authors is rather addicting. It really is quite fun to click the refresh button and watch the numbers update (I am such a nerd!).
Also, the reader feedback has been awesome. I have even picked up a couple ideas that have now resulted in a 12th chapter and, hopefully, an improved ending. So thanks!
Hope all you dads out there had a Happy Fathers' Day. The wife & kids got me a Doctor Who Disappearing Tardis Coffee Mug for mine. Now, if only I drank coffee. :)