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June 9, 2013
Posted at 12:22 pm
 

Thanks SOL

My helper Szilvi fixed my story "Loving Wife Dies: Bora Bora" and I sent the mended version to SOL. I told Szilvi, that the SOL editors would change the fixed version in 2-3 hours, but they changed in some minuts. Thanks SOL.
I wrote a little explanation in two parts of the story, to explain Max did not say he forgave Martha. Some feedback persuaded me to show stronger, he did not say "I forgave this shit to you." this is important.
I am writting my 7th story and I am planning my 8th story, where a beautifull 21 years old amputee will be the second chance woman.........