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Submissive Neighbor Chapter 10 (UPDATED)

May 8, 2013
Posted at 7:58 am

I received several feedback emails about this story ending too abruptly and I agree. Here's what I replied to one of them.

Yes... it was an abrupt ending but I had written myself in a corner. There were too many females for me to keep a flow going so I decided that I (and Ryan) had had enough.

I have done this before... get my main character in over his head with too many women for me to feel comfortable writing about. This was heading towards a harem situtation with sex slaves and that isn't what I wanted. Sometimes my stories take on a life of their own and don't always lead me down a path that I want to continue with.

That being said... Thanks to you all for reading my attempts at writing.