I have gone through Knocking On Door and did edits on each chapter to make corrections I missed and readers pointed out to me. I also turned some of my one sentence paragraphs into actual multiple sentence paragraphs as also pointed out to me by a few readers.
Thank you.
I also made a few changes to assure continuity where edits got out of control and I missed some of the references to actions I removed from the story before I uploaded a couple of the chapters.
I have 3 new chapters waiting on my proofreader.
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