This story has receive some of the worst scores of any of my stories. I re-read it this morning and other than a couple of word changes I thought it was O. K. Not great by any means but it was good enough to get me hard.
So... I'm not sure if my writing is getting worse or that folks are getting tired of my story lines.
I think I need to take a break from writing right now. I will read some of my more popular stories again to see what worked and what didn't. There are a couple of stories that I have been thinking about expanding. Maybe now is the time.