I have been working on revisions to chapter's 1 and 2 to show more of what is going on in Kat/Kitten's head. I will be doing this through on-going commentary/discussion/argument between two inner voices in Kat/Kitten's mind.
One is the voice of what she considers her true inner self. This voice will appear in blue in the story.
The other voice is the product of the fact that Kat/Kitten grew up in an extremely sexually repressive environment. Kat/Kitten refers to this voice as her evil twin and it will appear in red.
Chapter 3 is ready and will be going to my editor as soon as I can get the revised chapter 2 posted.