I don't know about other authors but writing can sometimes be a slow process. Self criticism can kill your productivity more than anything. I found myself agonizing over this last chapter as it is a critical turning point for our players. I hope it turned out well.
In this chapter things start to go wrong for Aime, Sarah and Mike. Earl asserts himself and life will never be the same for the players.
I have received dozens of positive comments which I appreciate wholeheartedly . I have responded to everyone that left a return email address.