I have been getting feedback on Chapter 4 of Mommy's Boy Takes Charge (?). They are split equally between those wanting Willy to dominate his mother and other's who like that he can't dominate her.
I am trying to come to grips with ending this story. I am torn about how to end it and have even contemplated using 2 alternate endings.
I need a couple of days to figure out what I want to do.