I posted two chapters today. I think they go together and didn't want them to be split up so I posted the second one.
I am grateful for all of the comments both positive and negative. It is hard when you get two and one says they love it and the next says they don't for the same reason. I sometime feel like I should change it to make the readers happy but then I have to think about how a change in chapter 30 may effect something in chapter 31 or chapter 61. Everything is linked together in one way or another.
Britt is a teenager with hormones, a good body and a mind that understands what is going on around him. He is going to have sex and as much as he can. If you don't like sex then you can skip over it. Some chapters will be harder than others. I guess what I am saying is that I am sorry if my story is not appealing to you but it is my story. I hope you continue to read. I use and appreciate constructive criticism but if you are just writing to say it is boring or too much sex then you are wasting your time. I can use it on chapter 11 of book two which is what I was writing last night. That is 43 chapters from now. I don't have the time or desire to rewrite the entire story.
Thanks for listening to my rant and as always, Thanks for reading.