Thank you to everyone for the positive feedback on How Did It Begin? I am new to the writing game and have been working on two stories. One that I had an editor for from the beginning and then How did it begin. I now have an editor for it as well, but only got the offer after I had started posting it. I have rewritten the first two chapters for editing and will post them with several more as soon as the editing process is finished. It should be a much improved read. As for those that are trying to figure out exactly what is going on in the story, well, I'm only going to tell you through the story so you'll have to just keep reading. Thank you again.