I re edited Chapter 1 as there were quite a few mistakes in it so it may read better now.
Today I posted Chapter 2. I hope you enjoyed the story. As I mentioned in the previous entry I'm working on a longer story with a plot to it. I'm also working on a couple of others when I can.
I appreciate all the nice and even constructive comments. They have been helpful. If you haven't read my other stories check my Stories page.