Chapter 2 is now up. Another chapter that is a bit shorter than the ones I normally write, but a improvement on chapter 1 at least (in size wise).
Thank you to the readers who have sent feedback and the encouragementt, its all been positive so far.
If you have any helpfull suggestions to make the story better, please write to me. If you just want to say the story sucks then there is no point, but if you can point out why it sucks or if you have helpfull suggestions then I'd like to hear them.