I finally submitted the latest chapter in Fuck Weed (should be up very soon) but I have to admit, I'm not really feeling much love for it. The main reason being that it doesn't move the story along very much, in fact, from a narrative point of view it doesn't need to be.
As I often find, I tend to ramble. I come up with neat ideas that I start putting in that don't really move the story along. The sex is fine, maybe even pretty good, but it starts to feel a little repetative and pointless.
So that said, it's time to wrap this story line up, I have one more chapter in the works to finish off the story and tie up loose ends. Then it's off to something new.
Kind of looking at either a science experiment gone wrong making the young pretty (what'd you expect) researcher into a total slut, or my original idea for a sci fi tale (tail?) of a beach house being invaded by breeding aliens made up mostly of beautiful women with big cocks and mind control gadgets. Any preferences?
Anyway, and I know I've said it before, I want to make the next story much tighter and focused on moving the plot and characters along (not forgetting this is about the sex after all). Should make for a better read I think.
As always I do appreciate your feedback, positive or negative. In fact the above realization bame from an honest criticism from a reader that enjoys a lot of what I do. So thank you.