I have been contemplating making some changes to the first scene of Rebecca Danced for some time.
I put the new first chapter in the queue tonight, you should be able to see it first thing tomorrow (Friday).
The idea is to engage the reader more quickly. Instead of setting up the scene when Tony first sees Rebecca, we jump right in. If you want to check it out and let me know what you think there is no need to read past the first five or six paragraphs and I'd appreciate your comments.
There are more updates to come to all of the stories, but they are just small fixes to typo's and the like. I'll get them in over the next few days.