Yeah! I fixed and am now happier with it. Like most authors, I'll never be completely happy with it and could tinker with it for years before I thought it was perfect. I am now letting it go.
I did fix a minor issue in Chapter 1, nothing important, just the phrasing of a name in one section.
I hope everyone enjoys the story.
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