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November 4, 2011
Posted at 7:38 am
Updated: November 4, 2011 - 7:40 am
 

Taking down Chapter 4

Sorry folks, but I had to take down the submission of the final chapter, 4, of Taking a Chance. I'm just not happy with it. I'll try my best to get it back by tomorrow, but I can't make any promises at this point.

I think I rushed through the ending and it just doesn't work right. I need to slow the pacing a bit and add in some more of Greg's POV and description. The actions of the characters don't match up with their personalities without a bit more explaining.

I actually couldn't go to sleep for quite a while thinking about their actions. I was finally able to go to sleep by telling myself I would take the chapter down first thing in the morning.

Sometimes I hate my brain.