This is a really weird story. Kind of a goofy one and I wasn't sure if it would continue, but it is. It was written about 6 or 7 years ago. Maybe? And it's a real pain editing for grammar, but I'm trying to go through the chapters. Back then I was almost as bad at writing as I am now and so there's a lot to fix.
But like I say, it's really goofy and just plain porn, with nothing terribly redeeming to save its soul. I think the first 3 chapters are the best. They work well together, the later chapters not as much. I don't remember why I decided to change perspectives, but I did and now I kinda wish I hadn't. So...there it is.
I think I'll be posting Motherfucker sometime soon, or else Daddy's Little Whore. I haven't decided yet. I'm keeping busy.