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Updated Chapter 10

September 8, 2011
Posted at 2:28 am

Just submitted an updated chapter 10 to fix a few typos and added a bit to a paragraph early on. My mentor Amanda Serve pointed out to me that having the girls eat fast food dressed slutty wasn't a big deal before in the story, so I added a bit to address the guys change of thinking.