I am back to being more active. Posted a new chap of HPTSS and now reposting corrections to the previous two chapters.
Pardon my errors, but the most recent chapter was unedited, as my primary editor lost internet access for a while (through no fault of his own).
I have another chapter in the works. As always, I am doing this to improve my writing, so give me more feedback please, the more detailed the better. Although I like attaboys as much as the next guy, they don't really give me much to work with insofar as improvement. :)