I finally finished another story. It is a bit different with 2 men, 3 boys and 6 girls. The boys have a hard time deciding which 3 of the 5 girls they wish to marry. Then it comes to who gets who pregnant which is the essense of the story.
The first two chapters are published now. The rest should be in 2 chapter increments every couple of days.
Constructive comments are always welcome. Just remember I write the way people talk, not out of English books. Remember that spell and grammar checkers cannot catch everything, especially if the word is spelled correctly yet wrong for the sentence.