Today I added Chapter 2. The phone conversation between Saundra (Bobby's mother) and Alice has ended. Now things start happening between Bobby and his Mother when Alice and her daughter show up.
I made corrections to Chapter 1 as suggested by a couple of readers and hope it reads better now. Then I did a complete review of Chapters 2 and 3 so all should be well now story wise.
I'm still working on a few other stories and should have them ready soon.
Thanks to the many who sent comments regarding the first Chapter. They were all appreciated.