You know might hat's really off to the guys and gals that do this reguarly.
Read, read, and reread.
The moment you post however. Oops theres a mistake there, and another there, and how did I ever miss that one.
Thank you for all the feedback on the first two chapters. I hope to repay your continued interest in how this story develops, by not making quite so many dumb mistakes as time goes on.