I have submitted this and it will be posted sometime soon. I added a note to the front that will hopefully explain that you need some background either via the Jake stories or in the Philippines before you read the story.
I fixed some long standing typos and reworked a little bit of dialog that just wasn't exactly right.
Once this is up, if there are other type's please, please email me. I have looked at this stuff for so long I am just not catching them all.