Just handed off chapter 3 in the "El Yes" tale to moderation. With any luck, I didn't leave too many boo-boos in place.
As always, your comments and corrections are all appreciated. Enjoy the read.
Warmest regards, Ol'Mac
P.S. Just found a major 'Owie' in the text. Went ahead and sent in the fix for it. We'll see how long it takes to post. Thanks again, Folks.