Mea Culpa! or in English, Ooops!
Well, I apologize again to my readers. I continually try to post clean text but somehow, my brain just doesn't catch everything, no matter how hard I try. So, as I read the posted text on SOL I found a couple of errors I'd missed.
Well, that led to finding some things that could be added to enhance the story. (Of at least I hope did so.) So after a few hours of revisions, VOILA, another revision is now up.
I think this revision or Chapter 7 is better or at least I'm deluding myself into believeing that. So, if you read this Blog entry and already read Chapter 7, a re-read might just be interesting as there is a lot more information about Spirits' origins.
Just one final note: The newest revision, as I said, is up and running. It's fairly clean although I did make a couple of errors with quotes. In editing the prior text I left a couple out and once I typed a single for a double.
They are easy to ignore. I'll leave things as they are for now. When I send through an entire story update, they will be included in the corrections and additions I make to the story.