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Bullet - Revisited

August 17, 2010
Posted at 11:59 am
Updated: August 17, 2010 - 12:03 pm

Reviewing my scores for the Bullet, I was quite surprised to find someone rated me with a "2" for Technical. Interesting. Not sure why because I got no indication from any feedback that my words, sentence structure, grammar and the like were totally pitiful.

In grade school you get a "2" if you can spell your name right. I did that when I submitted my story. Spelled my name right. I checked. I'd think the least I could get is a "3" then.

Anyway, I went back and scanned my text, read the story a couple of times trying to figure out what was so offensive that I RATED a "2." I'm clueless.

But I did find a couple of typos. Not a lot, just a few ... less than FIVE! Things that get left when I'm editing. Anyway, I fixed them.

So, if you've read the story, Chapter 3 specifically, try reading it again. I've added some stuff to enhance the story and, well, in my opinion, made it a little better.

At least that's what I think. But who knows, I'm just a "2." Go figure?