Well, I've sent off chapter 3 of the story to the posting queue. It should be up with the next set of updates.
If you haven't read the first two chapters, I hope you find my story interesting. It's from a different POV than I've seen before.
For first time readers, I noticed a few errors in the first two chapters. They're all small ones and if you vote, I hope you'll overlook them in your scoring. I'll be reposting the first two chapters, as corrected, later.