Along the way, I've had a few comments about the third element in my Saga about Mandy; Mandy, Bob and Jason.
If I've been successful, the changes I've made to the storyline makes the story clearer and easier to read. I've also corrected dozens of typing, spelling and grammatical errors. A few readers have mentioned the errors interrupted their reading pleasure.
I know I like the story more in it's current form. I hope you do too.