Well, I've sent off a repost of Chapter 1. Seems like I made a historical error in the story. A reader pointed out that the DRAFT had ended before Jim went into the Army. I knew that. Well, I forgot about it, LOL.
So, I've changed that to Enlisted, as since 1973 (I think) the US Military has been all volunteer.
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