Hi all the response to the story so far has been great I was not expecting this from my first outing. Thank you to all who have offered support, criticism, and advice. I am currently working on a support cast and filling out my outline some more. This may slow the next chapter a little, but I feel that it should improve the story. I have mainly been free writing to this point I had the first part mapped in my head and some inkling what I want to do from here as well, so I am making my map sorry if that was a little repetitive. I want to give a big thank you to Bachgen my editor who has helped my dyslexic ass out a great deal and has hopefully made it a better read for you. I will try and answer all emails as fast as I can good or bad.
Till next time,