So, I got much better reception to my second story than the first, and my only personal explanation for that is the more overtly sexual content of the second. It's alright. I know in my heart that they're both good stories but most definately each for different audiences. I'm going to keep writing, because I haven't really gotten any horrible critiques. Not that an awful critique would stop me, but you know, it's nice to get some compliments.
