So I started to not like Laramie. Then I stopped writing it and I didn't like that.
In the mean time I turned my life upside down -- in lots of ways...most of which don't matter to you, but all of which (seemingly) kept me from writing.
Now I'm thinking about Laramie again and I realized that the last chapter was what turned me off. So I'm starting over with that one, will repost it in the next couple of weeks and then work out the rest of the story.