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Writing for the female reader

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In my Tony Sorrentino persona, I try to write for both male and female readers. Several of my other pen-name authors are Female writers like Honeysuckle Lime and others but Tony is the only male that seems to draw a female audience as well. Some of my Romance stories have been under a female name but I suspect they are lacking in romance for the average female reader. A reader reminded me recently that most female readers tend to prefer stories in other genres than my usual erotica and I confess that unless the story is decidedly Western, Crime, Science Ficton, History, War. I label it Erotica because I felt it would attract more readers. I think that might be fuzzy thinking because the inclination of female readers is to avoid the Erotica genre because most of it is lacking for their romantic thoughts.

New stories

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Now have two new stories that interest me greatly. One is "the live-in Housekeeper" and the other is "Her Legs went up forever". The sex indicator on these two stories is "much sex" which is about as high I go on all of my pennames. The newest addition is about an extremely tall girl called Sabrina who is sexy but a little gawky in her movements. She loves being touched by strange hands but pretends she is oblivious to it all. Any fool can see her pulse beating rapidly and her tongue hanging out looking for a place to lick with her wetness and need for loving. She is all skin and bones and once you get inside her, her meat is close to the bone and she enjoys taking oversized cocks inside her all the way to show she can pleasure a man just like those girls with big boobs and plump backsides. Her humping style is mostly doggie and so intense that she shivers and quakes with continuous orgasms the entire time your cock is buried deep inside her tight little channels.

New story moving fast

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Since I have finished the updating of all 500 stories in the Harry Lime account, I have been working on some new stories in Tony's account. All 82 of his stories have been updated but will still write new chapters in many of his stories as the series continue. One new story recently added is called "The Live-in Housekeeper". I like this story line and the response has been encouraging. Working on chapter 5 now and will continue to write more chapters as the interest is most gratifying and the comments are generally positive. I plan to write mostly in this Tony Sorrentino penname for awhile working on his uncompleted stories and adding some new ones at the same time. The housekeeper in this story is from South of the Border but the real one is actually Thai, is a bit older and is a real attractive Lady. Her figure is probably a 10 in anybody's book and her daughters are petite and lovely with their slender legs and bottoms. Harry is unable to keep his hands off their bottoms but they don't seem to mind his fickle fingers finding their target even in the dark. It all adds up to the spice of life and we will see how the story ends.

comment on new story

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I recently added a new story to Tony's penname that is called "Little Miss Bitch Needs a Change" I know I don't get great ratings on most of my 1,700 stories on this site and this is no exception. I suspect it is because of my often complicated writing style and a dislike for dialogue that is so important to many readers.This story has gotten several comments and I do so appreciate comments because they help guide my writing direction. Now that I am down to only four stories left in the Harry Lime penname to update out of the 500 stories in his file, I plan to turn my attention to Tony and add to some of the 80 some odd stories in his file. A genre that I like is Westerns and I hope to add to some of the western stories in Tony's penname. It is strange how the Old West is a good scenario to write in but films and Television is forgetting the success of "High Noon" or "Gunfight at the OK Corral" in favor of the modern approach like "Longmire" or "Yellowstone". I like the Native Indian flavor of Longmire but do not care much for the Soap Opera style of Yellowstone. I sense the actors are uncomfortable in their roles and the writing is lacking.

final yellow-lined story "crimes of passion"

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The last remaining story in this pen name is "Crimes of Passion" It is a detective crime story in the Law and Order style. It is intended to be 48 chapters total with 4 separate cases of 12 chapters each. That would make it into a 220 page book. This first case is more than halfway through with a goal of finishing the first case by July 30. I saved this one for last on my remedial updating because it is a complicated story and needed some degree of thought. The scenario for all 4 stories is the Las Vegas Clark County area which has a wealth of locales and characters and stories to fill several books. I lived in Las Vegas for a couple of years and I loved it. Each day and night was filled with sexual tension or a sense of danger that would generate a story in itself. I changed the genre from Erotica to Fiction and the level of sex from "Much" to "Some" That is because the sex is in the story but the story is not about the sex. I changed the voting from allowed to prohibited because while most of the grades were in the "8" category the grades ranged all over the map from 2 -10 which I think was due to dumping all first 6 chapters at one time and only chapter 7 as a later follow up. That is why it is showing as only 2 chapters in the listing. I will be adding chapter eight tomorrow and the final 4 chapters of this story by the end of July.

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