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It has always been my goal to learn how to express sexual actions in as an erotically detailed way that makes me feel as much a part of the action as possible. So I often reread my work and see if I can improve it. I have just made some changes to Cunnilingus for Beginners and hope it reads well for those who have taken interest in my work.
Thanks to all of you for allowing me this luxury or (laughs) folly.
In chapter nine Toby asks Samantha Onassis for a weekend off because his landlady (Irina Strelnicov is coming to visit. Sam, who had a lenghty affair with Sergei Strelnicov before he married Irina, is suspicious of an affair going on between the two of them. Rina introduces Toby to anal sex.
As I do with all of my series I get to a point where, because of the gap between writing each chapter I need to completely reread the story from the beginning. (Perhaps this is due to my age). So, prior to writing chapter 7, I began reading and of course made changes which improved and tightened up the structure of each chapter which led to a better Chapter 7. So I have reposted all of my chapters which makes it possible for my new readers to a better grasp of the story. I wonder if all writers do this.
Toby leaves for college (Johns Hopkins University) staying in an apartment building owned by Rina Strelnicov. He meets the owner of Sig's Diner (Samantha Onassis), a thirty-five year old single woman who asks him to come to work for her.
I had hopes for my story Reminiscence but it was unpopularly received. In rereading it I find the story poorly written. So with apologies for below standard work I discontinued it and replaced it with "Seeking Manhood" which I think is more in line with my other work.
Thank you very much for your continued support.
Peter
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