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Join my Discord

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Hey everyone.

I just posted chapter 11 and changed my endnote to include a link to my new discord. There you can talk with me and each other, offer suggestions and make predictions, and share pictures of what you might think various characters might look like.

It's a much more interactive way to leave feedback and ask questions. i hope to see you there.

https://discord.gg/c7nmCzz7r9

Discord

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Hi everyone,

So, I've been getting some great feedback and comments which I always enjoy reading. But, I was wondering if anyone would be interested in getting involved in a more significant way. I was thinking about starting a PBG discord server.

Channels like:

General discussion (SFW,)
NSFW chat
Theory's and predictions
Suggestions and Ideas
Chat with the author
Other story recommendation
Character chat (individual characters)
Errors

Etc. Just a rough idea but if there are enough people interested in joining and building a community I think I could be fun.

Anyway let me know if its something you would think about joining and feel free to include suggestions for channels or features.

Max

Original story and feedback.

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So, a quick post to answer a few questions and to ask a favour.

First, many of you have been asking if I have the original story and if they can have a copy. Of course I have a copy. i'm not writing it from scratch and trusting my memory. Some parts are cleaned up, others removed or replaced. Some chapters are entirely new, while some have been removed.

The further I edit and post, the more I'm sure a re-write as im doing is the way to go. The original is a mess. The spelling and grammar, or a lack of, is enough to make you cry. I'm surprised anyone made it past the first chapter. Chapter one alone had over 500 errors detected by my editing software.

So I won't be sharing the original. I want this new version to be a story I can proudly associate my name with.

Secondly, calling all original readers!

I would like to hear from you. I want to know what you remember of the original, what you think of the new version, and if you noticed any new sections. But, more importantly, I want to know, from what you remember, what you liked and disliked about the original. Favorite and least favorite characters, scenes you like or found boring or of no purpose. Kinks you want to see more or less of, or new ones added. The more you tell me, the better.

That's all for now. Remember updates every Friday and I am a complete whore for feedback via DM or comments, so keep them coming.

Max

Upload schedule and feedback

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Hi all,

First, thanks for all the support and feedback so far! This is a big job, and your feedback and comments help me stay motivated. So far, the response has been tremendous, and I hope it continues as the more significant changes start to appear. The first ten chapters have mostly been spelling and grammar with a few reworked and new scenes.

Now, I have listened and have decided to give you, the people, what they want. Weekly updates every Friday. I can't promise it will always be that way, but I believe I have enough chapters already finished to keep ahead and post even if life throws a curveball and I miss a week or two of writing.

So chapter 4 will be posted tomorrow (07/01/22 or 01/07/22 for the US) and then every Friday. I'll also be addressing the few minor errors that slipped through the net. I'm using new editing software, and sometimes it slips in a different word or changes something without me realizing it.

Please keep on voting, commenting and messaging your thoughts and feedback, and if you read the original let me know if there is anything you hope is or isn't changed.

Max

I'm back! Updates and uploads

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Hey everyone.

I'm back with a new name (Previously Rising Flame) and a re-worked and improved (hopefully) version of Puzzle Box Genie. The original had over 850000 downloads so I hope the 2.0 version does even better. I already have a good chunk of the chapters done so should be able to keep up with a regular upload schedule. At the moment that's every other week but I might make it shorter depending on how thing go. The first 3 chapters will be uploaded a day apart each to get things started.

I really hope you all like the changes and as always, please comment or message me with feedback, constructive criticism and any thoughts or ideas you might have.

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