I've never done this before, but there was such strong feedback on my story Brews & Brushes that I wrote a companion piece called Losing Faith, which I just posted.
Losing Faith tells the story from Brews & Brushes but in the 1st person perspective of the wife, Faith. You get a much deeper insight into why Larry did what he did. The story has a bit of overlap and some of the same dialog. I tried not to be too redundant, but some overlap was needed.
You get to understand Faith's motivations and what she REALLY did or didn't do.
I hope you like it.
Bandor
I love feedback on my stories. If there are things I could have done better, I'm always interested in improving.
Sometimes, though the feedback is very funny. Today I got this:
"Her husband is not getting her ready for a job, he's pimping her. It is your story, write it as you will. I won't be readint any more of yours."
Maybe it was the tags which didn't do a good job of warning this reader in advance what the story was about. Here's how it is tagged:
Tags: Ma/Fa, Coercion, Reluctant, Romantic, Fiction, Workplace, Cheating, Cuckold, Sharing, Slut Wife, Wimp Husband, Prostitution
Hmmm... Yep, nothing in there indicates the hubby might pimp his wife out to his boss for a promotion.
I'll try much harder to be more explicit.
Bandor