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Not a lot of changes, but a Lot of clean up. I have to give credit to Bohica for his hard work and sanitization of my writing. IT is still "MY" story, but it is HIS edits that make it readable. And I thank him for it.
I realize that all too often we don't appreciate our editors. Having been 3 1/2 years before finding one who would Read and Critique my bunch of writings, I wanted to publicly say how much I appreciate Bohica for his unwavering work on my Missives.
The first 10 are up, and ready for a new Group of Readers (As well as some old ones revisiting)
The first 10 and Prologue are some what jumbled in order. I am asking that they be re-posted in order at the site here.
Please bare with me while we get this done.
I have FINALLY found a editor who has looked at my story and enjoyed it. SO he took on the Very hard work of finding and correcting my English language mistakes. Thank you Very Much.
As such I will be re-posting the entire story in January. All 40 + chapters.
The goal is to put here something worthwhile for people to read. Yes the topic is OFF THE WALL, and you would think it is supposed to be on a Snuff Site. But you have to remember that the SNUFF is about the expression of people in a unbelievable situation. One where the actual violence is incidental to the operation of the business.
I want to thank the Reader "Bohica" here at SOL for his very generous use of time, conversation and help in getting the distractions of this document out of the way.
Thank you all for your generous readership and I hope that the story is now much more enjoyable.
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