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In the queue.
Nothing major changed, just smoothed out some of the writing and made Leri a little more present, even if not actually there, yet.
Just to head-off those who've not yet messaged me about the slowdown of proof-read or new material, I'm dealing with the death of a close family member and a house move, either of which would derail the best of us, but both at once seems really unfair.
Basically, it's not easy to get my head in the right place to work on Luke's story when those things are still fresh.
So rest assured, it is coming, but this is one of those unforeseen times when a leg-break takes your bails.
Clee
Proofed chapter seven in the queue.
Nothing major, just minor vocabulary smoothing and a couple of typos that got squashed.
Clee
Latest proof-read chapter is in the queue for posting.
Aside from proofing and vocabulary issues, this time there is a scenelet where Stef lets Luke into her thinking processes and he gets to see that Stef is not so much in a certain rush into things as he supposed. It doesn't change anything material, but it contextualises things a little.
Clee
In the queue for posting.
This time there is a little more work on the dialogue of all the characters, but nothing that changes anything more than making voices more consistent over the whole of Book One and Book Two.
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